Sunday, May 2, 2010

Vantage Point (PART 2) : THE MILITANT

Jihad that was the name we were taught and bred with. We would die for it and martyr our lives for jihad. That was what we were taught and forced to do otherwise they would kill our children and our family. He had to do this otherwise they would kill his family. These were the thoughts running wildly in Ajmal's mind as he was pointing his rickety old AK 47.

He was a farmer living a silent peaceful with his family. He could still remember the dreadful day when they came and took him away and threatened to murder his family if he dint agree to go with them. It was 5 yrs since that happened. Now he was a killing machine with no remorse or mercy. He was bound by no laws of any country the only law he knew was to kill the person he was pointing his gun towards.

Ajmal and 4 others had set out towards this village a month ago on foot with minimal food and shelter. They were supposed to set up shelter in a village that was at a strategic point. Once they set up a base he had to call command centre and more of his martyr brothers would join them there for the war of Independence. It was a dreadful and gruelling journey to the village off the 5 only 3 could make it to the village. Two of his martyr brothers were sacrificed to the treacherous mountains of the Himalayas.

But they had somehow managed to reach the village and contact their command centre when they saw the indian army men walking towards the village. Ajmal was the first to spot them and he alerted the rest of them. Ajmal was thinking it was not supposed to work this way. How did they manage to know that they were here. But nevertheless he knew what had to be done. Their survival depended on the death of 5 army jawans then so be it. So they took point at 3 places and opened fire. With the old guns they had half of the bullets went awry but one bullet from ajmal's gun killed a jawan. But the training of the Jawans and their fire power was much superior to theirs and he helplessly watched the other 2 martyrs getting killed.

Ajmal had to run it was all over nothing could be done now, he was the only survivor at least till now. If he dint leave then he would also have to take his last breathe. So he made a run for it, initially after a 100 metre sprint he thought he was alone but then when he turned to confirm he could see the silhouette of an army officer chanrging towards him with vengeance and speed. He was so captivated with the officer that he almost bumped into this on coming lady who was frightened by the bullets that were flying all around the place. He had to stop that officer, he reached down his fur coat and took out a hand grenade removed the pin and was about to throw it.....

Bannggggg....

He dint know what hit him, it was a flash of light for a fraction of a second, the grenade went astray into the nearby market. That was followed by intense pain and a feeling of failure. Not because he failed his mission, but the failure of letting down his family. His family would be ravaged and murdered now, because he dint succeed. He had let them down, he had failed his promise, he could do nothing. All he saw was the officer who had shot him down looking down upon on his dying body. Taking his last breathe all he could only blurt out was,

"Forgive me. God please forgive me."

10 comments:

abhi said...

Dude Superb :) ..!! I think this is the best till date..
The way of seeing it in 2 different angle..!! brilliant :)..!!! Loved it..

Dude once u should make it to Himalayas..!!

Asha said...

awesome!!!!!!!!!! peeking inot both the minds.. tough job but well done!!!!!

Now i'm gettin a penchant for reading more of ur stories...

Roopali Dewan said...

Its getting better and better...2 sides of a coin....nice to see you think from the other perspective too...keep it going :-)

Ishma... said...

waiting for part 3... Wonderful :)

Deepak said...

@Abhi: Thanks dude.. :) I wanna go man.. Planning to do a ride there after i quit job but then in sept it will be difficult to ride there alla.. so nodona... :)
@Asha: ya ya tough job wonlee.. :) i dint wanna make the story one dimensional.. :)
@Roopali: As i said i dint wanna make the story one dimensions so wrote from the other perspective also... :)
@Ishma: Part 3 is getting ready wonlee will let ya know once its out... :)

Unknown said...

heyyyy awesome....this is getting very interesting...3rd part plssssss......... :):)

Unknown said...

Finally read ur blog.. wow!! worth readin it man.. awesome.. i liked both the parts.. waitin for the 3rd one.. :)

Deepak said...

@Sendura: Working on the 3rd... Will keep you posted... :)
@Swetha: I am glad you liked it da... Thank you... :)

ramz said...

I love wat u write ..leaves a mark on ma mind and the thought keeps ringing for a long time.. Amazing Job .. !!!

Mrinalini said...

Terribly mindblowing!!